2009 Q2 query- proving within MA or proceed aspect

[asrisaku]

Hi again,

As a non UK candidate, it is difficult for me to write it long and also I have a weak background and most of study is self learning. I would like to share my attempt and it may be useful for someone to see bad and good things. This question, I had a spectacular friend review it.

Any feedback, please let me know.

Thanks
Arnut